One of Lindsey's greatest strengths is the way she is so precise. I love her first paper, because I feel like I can read write through it without a problem. I struggle with being precise, and I tend to be vague at times. However, with Lindsey, she explains each point clearly and carefully. I especially enjoyed her final paper because I feel this is where she shows that she has truly developed as a writer. I am open to whatever kind structure or grammer techniques in writing, and I feel like she stepped out of her bounds to show us how she felt. I loved the way she incorporated lyrics with writing. I feel like it brought an element of herself to her writing. One of the main things I see in Lindsey's writing is her clarity. Again, I love the fact that she takes the time to explain things at length, and most of all, be patient with her writing.
Posted by bvaldez1988 on December 8, 2008
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