After having read some of Lindsay's work, I see alot of myself in her. For example, in her elbow-bartholomae response, I can totally agree with some of the things she is saying. For example, she talks about how teachers should have, atleast, some involvement in the student's writing. Another example is her final essay! Man, I loved reading it because I am so like her! I love the despair and the drama because I tend to write like that for comical reasons. Now, I don't know if she does it for humor, but it definitely reminds me of myself.
As a writer, I think Lindsay has definitely developed. For example, when I look back at her first paper, I feel like she is still trying to find her voice. I don't get too much of a feel for it, because it's on an academic topic. However, when I read her final essay, I feel like I can pinpoint her paper out of a crowd because of her voice. It's so visible, and she writes in a way that the reader can definitely relate to. I think voice was something that she struggled a bit finding, but when she finally found it, she definitely used it in the best way possible.
Posted by bvaldez1988 on December 8, 2008
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